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My Version of Light

Brightness
The light of a candle
Burns far too short
Spreading vision and warmth
For only those near by.

It flickers through the wind
Falters in the turrent
Sometimes never to be lit again.

We move this candle
From place to place
Does its light stay?
Is it forgotten when it leaves?

We spread our light so seldom
Secluded within our own divinity
Our home is our safety
But what of the world?

The world is something we never truly touch
All that's left is a memory
And it's not even yours
Darkness
 

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It is very deep and meaningful.
 

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I havent been in the lounge this week...and Kevin that poem is deep...did you write it??
 

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yeah he did, he is a great poet
 
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